The narratorvoice should defently be reworked. The speed is just fine, but the quality and the believebility of the voice should be better. With right equipment and a few hours spech preparation this should be no big deal! The story is so potent for the improvment of the world, that this should neot be dissmissed because of the voice.
its good and has room for some really wise conclussions. I am currious how it will move on
The animation and the music was really good. I kind of missed the purpose of the story because it moved ahead so fast.. If the 'narration' was supposed to sound like rapping, it didn't work out perfectly, it should have been somehow rhymed better with the music. Oh and this might also have needed a loading screen and something to stop it from auto-looping. Anyway, this was a good piece of art, you managed to create a good atmosphere in this flash.