dont listen to the last guy
it was awesome!!1! the purpose was to be pretty static huh i think you should reopen this and get some people to do voice acting in the next ones... :D
I think it's a good video, however most of the animations are pretty statics or has repetitive and not so accurate cycles. The palette of color is interesting but sometimes the red is way too saturated , even pure red probably such as the blood which look a bit amateur. Also , I haven't seen the other episodes but this seems like a typical action packed manga animation with no real emotion , it's all about action and only action, but perhaps I'm wrong. Don't get me wrong I think it's a good starting but also has a lot of improvement to be made.
Sorry for my english.
Best regards , Mathieu.
You have a really nice style. Your art is excellent which I think is the best starting point to good animation. You've really perfected the art of capturing emotion, especially through slow motion. My one criticism would be that some of the shots (particularly at the start) lasted too long. I know you probably wanted to keep with the music but you need to think about editing in creating excitement. Generally speaking, the more action is occurring, the faster the editing bewtween shots. Even in movies where they use slow motion they will only use a littl bit because are at risk of loosing the attention of their audience if they show something in too much detail for too long. But Like I say it was awesome. I look forward to seeing what you come up with next =D
Hmm. . . Nothing Interesting.
Because Idea Of this "Tle Last Fight" Makes me to put 5.Not 4 and Not 1.
Other are Bad Because this is just Pictures... Animated Picrures.....
While it looks nice, and does indeed convey a story, it still feels empty. I'm banking on this being a result of there not being anything going on really. We have a few seconds of mourning, some dramatic camera play of two or three scenes drug out quite far, then a bit of fighting. The problem with the fighting is, there really isn't much. He chops up one, stands in the middle of em, THEN SUDDENLY BOOM! Now it's him and the "boss" fighting. About 10 seconds of two fight scenes, then an epic finish combined with a flashback of the prior episode.
Spice it up a little! A few more scenes instead of the same few loops n' played out pictures woulda made this far better. As is, it looks and plays out more like a comic book action scene that an actual fight.