The art is pretty okay but the animation needs some work. I really dont get what the music has to do with anything though. lol.
- Rain needs to be more realistic; it needs to go a bit slower and not so mixed up everywhere
- The artwork COULD be better but since this is manga, i assume it will have to do ...
- The animating part was somewhat "easy", as in, you didnt really see much effort into it. There was more still pictures then actual animation. Work on that.
- The quote... well, i am not sure if it was connected to the movie. sort of...