Wow
Frankly no one knows the real after effects of the original game which makes one speulate just as to what would happen
Author Comments
My first full production flash that has been completed. With four different flash series, this one was able to have its first episode finished before the others! Just hope I don't get side tracked with the other three. This is my first time with a real flash series attempt. I've mostly sat on the side lines watching other works and attempted to replicate certain techniques. I tried a variety of things from close up camera angles to other layering background effects that I've taken a liking to. Enough with my commentary though. Hope you enjoy the first episode!
Three short years have passed...
Ages will cross once again...
O.o
I always wondered about the after effects of the first game and now from what you've started as a gripping story line....now I can't wait to see what happens next.
Also maybe a game could be in the works if the story line goes well? Keep up the good work.
Good Storyline And Technique
This is a nice and recognized style with an interesting story. Something to catch the eye at the beginning might help your story jump out beyond the technique that you are learning. Maybe a prologue could help.
Are there any video game ideas in mind? It is rather suitable.
Good work.
Not bad
I liked your use of music and the mechs from Gun Hazard, although sometimes the music seemed a bit unnecesary like the bit before Lucca wakes up in the future where it gets cut off. Also when she wakes up she calls for Crono and Lucca(im guessing you meant Marle).
Like the guys before me said, the subtitles are a bit long. It's kind of annoying when you have to wait 5 seconds after you finish reading.
All in all it was pretty nice, I was entertained and you got me curious to see the rest of the story. I still think you can do better though (also watch for typos or spelling errors). I'll be waiting for the next one. ^^
RQProductions responds:
I'll be adding buttons to skip text in the second epsiode. Good to hear what people like and don't like. Makes everything better. I also uploaded an edited version to fix a few typos.
Not bad.
The subtitles list three times longr than they should.