spelling was crap, animation was good
Yeah, I'm being a grammar nazi too... try putting the script through a word processor or getting someone else to proofread it before you submit it (or both!).
But the animation was pretty good though. I'm a bit of a die-hard fan too - next one a big fight between ssj King Vegeta and ssj2 Gohan? And I guess Piccolo would help cos he always helps Gohan out...
(and who started calling supersaiyans ssj? I'll have to look that one up...)
So many spelling errors!
Grammar Nazi Attack!
Dad! your okay! -->Dad! you're okay!
(your as in something that belongs to you, such as: your mum, your face etc. you're as in you are, such as: you're ugly, you're bad at spelling)
de ja vue -->deja vu
knotice -- >notice