wow!! what a nice story, i love the whole animation in general.
(I am a drawer, trying to learn flash animation) I can see that the drawings need some work because it help in the animation, but the story really rock and that stole my attention. You can have amazing drawings and if the story is bad, the animation sucks (my personal opinion). Of course It doesn't mean that you wouldn't try to improve your drawing skill, but I consider that the whole animation was interesting. I like the how you play with different camera angle placing the camera in different location. You have potential as an animator. Well done!!
Thank you for the kind words!
Audio is good, but proportions is all wrong. Not a very serious flash submission here.
But 3 stars for the animating and try.
Your last two submissions were much worse.
Hey just because my anatomy sucks doesn't mean i'm not serious! But you're right, the characters do look pretty wacky... Thanks for the review.
nice little flash
I always throw my support behind flashes that aren't the highest of artistic merit drawing wise if the story has been given honest thought. The drawing wasn't even half bad either, but u may wanna work on ur lady drawings a bit.
I had to dock u 2 marks however because although the story was awesome, it has been done before on ng right down to the flying machine in a few different flashes (then again, dont worry, there are a billion Mario flashes out there).
Glad you liked, yeah the ladies arent my speciality in drawing (in life on the other hand...) And ive been working on anatomy since i finished this so expect my next animation to have good story AND good art :) Thanks for the review!
Animation was nice i thought, and it did keep my attention, clearly some people have the attention span of a goldfish. But i thought it was a good submission, keep up the good work, maybe work on the audio, was a bit too quiet at times, but still a fine submission :)
Glad you liked it, and yeah i agrea about the audio, might update it...
The story couldn't keep my attention at all, which was the better part of the flash. Your animation needs work...
As does your reviewing...