wow!! what a nice story, i love the whole animation in general.
(I am a drawer, trying to learn flash animation) I can see that the drawings need some work because it help in the animation, but the story really rock and that stole my attention. You can have amazing drawings and if the story is bad, the animation sucks (my personal opinion). Of course It doesn't mean that you wouldn't try to improve your drawing skill, but I consider that the whole animation was interesting. I like the how you play with different camera angle placing the camera in different location. You have potential as an animator. Well done!!