Sorry for no actual review, but...
It's great. You can work on it some more, though.
Also, i recommend you use some kind of noise-cancelling filter on all your recordings, or buy a better microphone, or just have it all recorded in one time, so you don't hear that noise coming up only when you talk.
Just a little more detail in the characters, draw them a little more shady.
Fix the microphone noise-thing.
Make it a little longer.
I guess its a joke you can pull if you have a twinkie and a friend but not something you should make a video out of,
Animation is good, the voice acting is ok, might as well get a recorder for 3D sounds?
Gets 2 points for originality although it's not even very funny at all and too short.
I like it