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The Lord Of The Rings

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temptation got the better of gandalf

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alright

the graphics are ok, but the actual animation needs works. As coop83 said, you need to proof read your piexe before publishing.

if i was you i would buy a better microphone (or speak clearer and louder).

P.S

a bit longer .O.K. Peace out.

theo-the-slayo responds:

ive actually got the best mic money can buy exulding studio equip but there thousands, its just when i import the WAV files into flash the qulity drops alot for some reason, i dont know how other people have such good qual voice acting,
any tips?

Could use better voices

It's certainly not a bad piece, but I think that you do need to give the piece a good proof read, before publishing the piece (Bilbo's ring, the apostrophe means a lot) and then perhaps getting all of the finer details sorted should be the best option.

From there, I'd say that you could do with getting the voice acting just a little louder and perhaps just a little more fluid, but it's a good effort.

When it comes to the delivery of the punchline, it could have been set up better, by having a longer build up and some sort of atmosphere before delivering Frodo's come on. I think that even though most people have seen those first scenes from Fellowship, it still needs a little more to make the picture fit the cause.

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ok...

WHATWAS THAT?????????
I liked the ending.

Merely OK...

... but keep at it!

..hmmmmm

The animation could have been better... but keep at it. You def have somewhere to start

theo-the-slayo responds:

cheers

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