Its notbad
~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok a nice little animation you have, the size was starting to get abit on the large side but it was worth the wait i thought, i think your "MENU" screen could use some spicing up maybe give it some borders and frames and maybe even a better "PLAY" button but for the mostpart there it was ok, Nice detail like the girls shirt "MUFFIN TOPS" hehe that was pretty funny, as for the art, you have some smooth looking characters and art, some "SUBTITLES" would be a nice addition in this little flash of yours, you have presented us with some pretty good humor on this, some funny jokes and even funnier dialog, this was a good flash was not too short and not too long and as i said about improving on the menu screen you can do abit of the same of the "END" menu screen, the "FONT" could be changed aswell, anyways good work here
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The menu screen where the play button is could use some spicing up maybe some borders/frames and maybe an actualy play button besides just the word play, also some subtitles could be added as a nice option to the viewers,
~~OVERALL~~
A good flash here with some funny humor and good characters i enjoyed it
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