This work is still in progress, so please don't judge so harshly! :D
The story follows an average guy named Jayson Reese. Jason is a single father to one, his daughter, but when his daughter is kidnapped and found dead in the park, Jayson exacts his revenge. Clues, accidentally left by the Father Mafia, leads him to the hit-man who took out his daughter. But, can Jayson revenge his daughters unrightful death by the Father Mafia, or will he fall to his demise too?
*Changed the Newgrounds Preloader
*Changed the color NG logo to BW
*Fixed the camera from showing off stage
*Arranged timing of effects a little bit differently
*Change from slow Fade-In to Cut
*6 New Scenes!!!
*Changed newspaper scene to static reading instead of Dynamic