Its a start
Ok well this is a start in something good here, i like the two swords on your menu screen well its kind of a menu screen, it has the two swords then a super "TINY" play button? that was sorta odd, i would think you want the "PLAY" button to be much larger so that its easier for the viewers to access it easier, also the starting page is very bland besides the swords, you need some backround there besides the white rather bland white backround, This flash once got started, was really notbad the art was bright and notbad, it however was "LACKING" in animation you just showed shots here and there with a tad bit of animation, so thats something you should probably work with abit, also i noticed the entire flash is abit short you may want to add just abit more content, give more to the viewer to expect in a full version, anyways good luck in the future and hope my review gave you abit of insight on stuff.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The Small play button was kinda odd make it large so people dont have to go looking for it,you had some bland backrounds at the menu screen, again fill in that area with atleast a color tone or something, , lack of animation, was throughout the flash you showed more still shots then anything else, try working on more animation from characters and scenes
Looks to be a good series but as stated above there could be some improvments