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OSAI Act2 p20

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Yeah, this is my first flash, so its probably going to suck horribly
part of my story OSAI, found on the What-do-you-do.net forums
Music by me
Story by me
Hope you enjoy

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nice

I like the music you put in Edman.

Two fingered salute,
~zlith



Good for a first try!

I like what I see. Being that I don't know the story already, it seems very abstract, which I like. xD Not sure if you remember me, you messaged me a few years ago about high tail hall I think (maybe it was tail underground? Anyway). Glad to see your still around, and even more glad you tried out flash; always good to see a new animator.


UntoldEdman01 responds:

OH MY GAWD, i totally forgot about you!, WHAT IS UP!!!!!


Good Mix

So yeah Edman, I managed to find it among the other piles of sheet on newgrounds. I remember why I liked this animation so much in the first place. The music fit and it was well animated. You worked real hard and finished it on a quick deadline. In conclusion keep on making more flash and maybe you should put a link to the thread on the forums.



Brilliant

~~REVIEW~~
This was a brilliant idea and i really like the orb and all after it dropped it tottally went random which was ok but just wish i could understand the story part of it abit more, work more on a streamline story

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More story would be nice but not as randome as you have here

~~OVERALL~~
Nice flash abit on the random side

~X~


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UntoldEdman01 responds:

thanks, i know i have raploads to work on, yeah it was a segment for the thing, and i put a lotta work on it, gah i was tired, more story next time got it


well animated,but........

i didnĀ“t understand anything from the story, so sorry, but no.(for me)
u r really good animating, so keep going!
the only thing that u have to "polish" is the story and thats it!!


UntoldEdman01 responds:

yeah i know, working on it, TY

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