Awesome skills man! Your animation style is wicked. It's heaps fluent, I can see you put a lot of thought into movement and expression. The character style is great, and I love the plot. My only criticism is I wish there was more!
I know it's a pilot episode but... that was extremely short!!!... T_T I wanted to see more!!... keep it going!
Really enjoyed the video. Cant w8 for a sequel!!
The animation....I've rarely seen anything so smooth. It was honestly a work of art.
I laughed out loud a few times, especially before the title card (the slap especially had me in stitches) and again, the animation really shone through.
The only thing keeping it from a 10 was that even though the animation was nice, the art itself was just a tiny bit lacking, and some scenes were just badly paced. Especially in the intro, it was just very slow and I nearly turned off the video because of that.
All in all though, an excellent watch, and a well-deserved 9/10.
That was sweet! I mean you had suspense and humor together, I was hoping for some BGM though.