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The Wishing Well.

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The Wishing Well.

PLEASE READ!!

- The following animation is NOT stolen, i posted it on the wrong account last night,
I have now removed it and resubmitted it on my main account, sorry for any inconvenience.

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Fix the loop

~~REVIEW~~
Well i gave a decent score for the content and art style, it looked like it had a unique kinda texture especially on the boys head, the animation seemed to be really on the shortside, which was a bummer because you really have something here worth the while, and with abit more longer and more content and ofcourse no "LOOPING" it will be a much more pleasent experience

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well first off to really improve on this try and fix that loop, this is an easy provess with some simple action script code, its called a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" now you will also have to add a stop and replay buttons so that the viewer can easily replay you flash aswell, now second you have a fantastic flash here but its too short so i suggest adding more scenes and or adding some new content give the story more depth, while still keeping the simple concept

~~OVERALL~~
nice art style could use some fixing though

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cutee

i gave you 8 cause it loops , you matched very wel the music and the clours xD
i really liked it xD
make more =)

aaw cute:3

that's realy cute, just a shame of the lenth and the fact that it's looping
the animation realy is good, nice job:)

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Score
4.20 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 31, 2010
8:49 AM EDT
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