You had the right idea but this particular one seemed more on the plain side, you should have added more content, but also the colors seemed all wrong you need some darker and deeper colors, i know its a card and all but seems like it needs more visuals and even some interaction
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Add some deeper colors, more content and maybe abit of interactivity
notbad but could be better
its not that bad
for being the first one its good
if its not a game avoid using buttons, scene changes play automatically for a reason
Great First Animation
I Believe that this is a very good animation for your first, and the music in the background is suited. I dont mean to be a critic and i wont dwell on all of the drawbacks that it might have, as im sure, as you get better, that these will improve. The only thing, and im sure it could be a matter of opinion, is that i dont particularly like the NEXT buttons. i dont know why, I just dont :)
Thats my only critical remark, but its judged on a matter of personal opinion. If the NEXT buttonsd appeal to you then thats fine!
Obviously as you get better so will the drawing but this is an interesting concept, a great first animation and a fantasic foundation to build on if you decide to continue animating in the future. Obverall, Good Job!!
Thank you so much for the feedback ,the only reason the buttons are in is because the professor demanded them as to prove we know how to use buttons. Otherwise I would not have used them.
this was nice to watch
but having to press a button to continue gets annoying
and get a better music loop