Alright for a short clip
I didn't exactly rofl here, but I can see the attraction. The dialogue is just fine - maybe clean up sound quality a little. As for the drawing, it needs work. The white guy (assuming that's Milo) actually looks decent, but a) reconsider perspective (it's kinda skewed) and b) draw it cleaner - it looks choppy. Do that, and you might have a good short here!
I like milo drawn like that. hes actually a character that came out of a comic i use to make when i was little :). but thanx for the collective criticism
I liked it!
It was short and funny! Good Good!
lol wasnt much to it i was just bored. but it was a little stomach tickler. thanx though :) i appreciate it
But ther is not effort on it. Try to do it beter
yea i know theres not really any effort in this one. like i said i was bored and i got bored while i was doin this one. but ima make things better in the future....i hope lol :D