Alright for a short clip
I didn't exactly rofl here, but I can see the attraction. The dialogue is just fine - maybe clean up sound quality a little. As for the drawing, it needs work. The white guy (assuming that's Milo) actually looks decent, but a) reconsider perspective (it's kinda skewed) and b) draw it cleaner - it looks choppy. Do that, and you might have a good short here!