it was okay
the animation seem pretty crisp, but it was just way too short.
Author Comments
Made this as continual practice in Flash; hope this doesn't bite too hard.
All animation is made with symbols; audio is from "Everything is Illuminated" Copyright 2005 Warner Independent Pictures.
Please excuse the spelling errors.
"Pretty Good"
If you get the reference, this is a bit of a chuckle. Plot could be a little further developed (as in some kind of ending reaction - bear eats rabbit?), but the art is really nice. Keep at it!
I like!
Excellently done, very smooth. A bit tweened, perhaps, but it works together very well. I also like the designs =D
Interesting but...
The animation quality was fair and the topic seemed interesting but there wasn't any development to it. As you said though, you used it as practice and I thought the animation was pretty good.
Pretty Nice . . .
Some pretty good animation, but the constant looping can get a bit irritating , even though it is kind of funny. More or less chuckle worthy.
The only thing I don't get is; where did the "I'm a vegetarian" come from? It seems like he just says it randomly.
shoelacekeys responds:
Thank you for the advice!
The clip wasn't meant to stand alone as a story, it was more for work on animation, but that's still no excuse (Actually, it gives me a few ideas).
As for the looping: how /do/ I fix that? I don't know much (if anything) of the technical bits of the program.
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