It was cute
~~REVIEW~~
I was impressed with the ideas here of the kid screaming then it all turns to chaos, it really made it entertaining there, as for your artwork on the characters that was actually pretty good and you showed lots of effort on detail, the story could have gone into more "SCENES" though as it was mostly in that one, anyways good luck in newer stuff which i hope to see soon
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more scenes maybe she chases him somewhere and he keeps losing her while still causing troubl or something like that
~~OVERALL~~
Good story funny and abit of chaos all rolled upto in one
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