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ShortPack ep 1

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Mar 14, 2010 | 11:49 PM EDT

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after tiresome events of pain and yelling into the microphone (plus crying) shortpack is complete! sort of. the crying part means today i messed up and deleted all of my progress in the pokemon heart gold skit. well thank you some people who supported me during the show. thank you, i will put in the rest because its due today. my birthday present to myself.



Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

not that bad, just lacks a actually fun stuff

well the drawing style is.. hum, too minimalistic, its not badly done, its just that most of the time the stickmans dont properly convey they state of humour untill their mouth moves (thats when thay are drawn), maybe the guys should have mouths when they appear, with whatever state of mind so we can feel it change to fear, surprise etc

the changes of emotion are too abrupt, in one frame he has a full smile, in the next his whole face shows anger... yeah i know you made something simple, but you did a handful of talking mouth frames but neglected to make the emotional transitions smoother

anyways the main feature of your animation are the small jokes, but that isnt much funny either

molen876onewgrounds responds:

actually, thanks for writing that. i really need to improve and since this was done a
year ago, i have improved. what i couldve put in there but i didnt would be a
penis joke. but that is so two years ago.


Rated 0 / 5 stars


A stupid flash that totaly copies tom and edds asdf movie. exsept you have a sqeelie voice and your not funny you must have no balls.

molen876onewgrounds responds:

screw you.


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

what frame rate

i didnt find it that funny youve improved alot but it still is outa sync i see you added a preloader cool

molen876onewgrounds responds:

the frame rate is 25