Hmm, I'd prefer if you added those extra charges!
You know like buying is such and such with an additional health check fee! Something along those lines! Anyway, the drawings and style is a bit crooked, good, don't get me wrong, it's a great animation! VA could improve on more emphasis, make it a little bit more exciting so that probably it's over the top, but keeps to the humor throughout. 9/10 Good work, keep it up!