good for your level of experience
for someone who has almost no experience in this I think you did a very good job, the only thing thats not good is the story line, its not really obvious whats happening without some explanation. good job non the less
Thanks. Yeah, I was kinda just going for random, trippy stuff.
Improve and aim high
The drawing and colors are simple and targeted, which makes it followable because you are not getting lost in the details. Pretty good for a quick animation. Improve sound quality next time and avoid cuts at the end. It kinda kills the atmosphere. A fade out would make it. I wonder what you can come up with if you had time.
Thanks. I appreciate the critique. This is the first time I've ever used sound in Flash (I made some random animated Pong .gif in high school), so it was pretty new to me and I didn't know how to make it fade. As for the sound, it actually sound clear and crisp on my PC, but when I uploaded it, it seemed to lose quality. Once I've finished this class, I plan on just spending some time messing around since I feel that it would help me do more interesting things when I do video editing (which is what I do as a hobby and for extra cash).
A little bit hard to follow.
Very nice, but it was a little bit hard to follow.
Anyway, I like your style. Keep it up! :)