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Exile Preliminary 4

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Aww shit, this is where it's at now! And i put the finishing touches on it too! Check those credits! Those are sick credits!

Alot of work was avoided once again by doing less work and having shittier scenes, but there were a few scenes there that just ROCKED your world! Like that ship-debris falling scene? BAM.

All in all, pretty cool, i was taking this thing super seriously before but now that i can see it being what it is... i totally don't wanna remake this anymore. But rather continue with "Ex5" with all my insightful eyes and college informed brain. So we'll see...

Cool, see ya! Maybe now i'll review patchman in the commentary box.


At First glance

(Note: i have never seen this series before) At first glance, this flash seemed somewhat amateur, the animation qualtiy was ok and other things along that line, but through watching this i noticed that you have a very interesting storyline, and as i payed attention more to the story line, the animation seemed to get nicer as i cared less for it being just a visual guide. Your animation was somewhat long, but the scene changes kept it interesting to me and i found it enjoyable an myself only wanting more at the end! I hope you keep up this series, as from what i have seen it is very well done.

Animation: 7/10
Voice Acting: 8/10
Storyline and Animation sequence setup: 10/10
Sound Quality: 8/10
Overall: 9/10 5/5

Something like sound quality i am not to worried about at all, for you are most likely trying to keep the file size small seeing that its already 20mb. I plan on seeing more of these and am going to watch the other parts now as well. Good luck with part V.


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RiverJordan responds:

Hey thanks for the awesome review man! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I definitely have a well planned story for the series!

Woohoo! That came out quicker than I expected!

You can definitely see how your animation skills improved over the course of making this thing. You clearly put a lot of time and energy into this. It shows, between all the frame-by-frame, and all the dialogue (good lip-syncing is the biggest pain in the ass in my opinion, as we've discussed). It came out great. Nice work!

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RiverJordan responds:

Hey thanks man! Means alot :)

very awsome!

cant wait for the next!

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This is an awesome serie, needs a collection :p

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4.07 / 5.00

Mar 8, 2010
4:54 PM EST