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Test animation made in 2005.
Made in flash MX.

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Defenetly awesome! That was a good start for shure. ^^

Excellent Start

I find that, yes, the animation is quite good. The shadows are something I enjoyed (with the nuance that it's a lazy shadow and you should prolly blot out the face on the shadow).

But, for some intangible reason, it feels incomplete. This could come from any number of reason, and I won't pretend to know which it is here and possibly confuse you. In short, it shows promise and I'm sure whatever you work on next will be well worth checking out.

Nice. Shows power.

Well, my rating is based the animation. Which was awesome. You went a little crazy with the brush tool in the beginning but then you brought yourself back with that awesome running, Kamehameha, and effects animation.

By effects I mean the time the stick figure hit the floor, their was awesome detail at the wind and dust that flew around him.

I'm glad you didn't put sound in. It would've made it look shorter then it already is.

But don't post up animation on NG unless their done and done right. This definitely shows you got awesome potential to make these little battle scenes. Once you replace the stick figures with people in this animation and make it maybe 30 seconds longer, it will get you a nice score and awesome reviews.

(Review Request Club Audition Review)

needs to be longer


Good Flash

it just needs sum DBZ sound affects then it will
alot more better

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4.00 / 5.00

Mar 2, 2010
12:50 PM EST