Ok, I do like your drawing style, nice. The concept was a little random but odd, and I like odd. My major complaint about this video was the sound quality, very scratchy and somewhat inaudible. If you just using a simple mic to record all you voice over and music try turning down the mic voi level in the"volume control" property window. Plus play with the vol of you actors voices (farther distance from mic, use a muffle on the mike(a sock will work, just make sure its clean)) With a few try's I bet you can get better audio on you next movie! GOOD LUCK
It was a nice effort. The part with the guy in the wife beater was a little hilarious because of the voice acting. But than again, some people may not like the situation. And the other stuff was really random.
But good effort.