Mike, Jake,... and Nick the Weasel?
Good for short, but not too good. Keep it up though!
Author Comments
So, this is my first flash...well actually I made one where a boxy car moved down a street and the start button didn't work and then I made one where two stick figures wobbled onto the screen, which had no background, and they said hello to each other but other than that! So, I don't really know if I should have even put this up but I'm looking for some advice. I know it's not long, badly animated and voiced, and has a lame story (if you could even say a story exists). I would appreciate it if I got good advice back on animation and improving the quality of sound.
Thanks for watching, rating and criticizing!
It's strange
More depth but i liked where it was going. I give it a thumb down and a horizontal thumb.
needs...
to be longer and have a little better of a plot..i think it has potential though
not too bad
looked OK, otherwise , you already said what is wrong with it. Theres just not enough to it. Take some time, make the next one so you feel good about it, THEN submit.