i share the other guy's sight
a bit sad without sounds,needs improvement.but very cool indeed.never been doing flash animation,and i think i would have never made this at 11 using a laptop mouse.
Author Comments
Hi! I'm 11. This is my first animation, it took me 3 weeks. Earlier today a user named thereturnoftomspulp stole this file from my dump and posted it. He stole it. Anyways, hope you like it!
Me again...
Sorry for the last review I sorta jumped the gun there. For an 11 year old this pretty good. Sound effects would make this a little better and nice twist at the end there.
Keep it up dude.
good job
hahha not bad for a 11 at least you made the legs move not bad not bad
you can still improve on this
I'm 19 and I can't really animate on flash well, so I can tell you got talent. Though, I could still see some elements that you could improve on. Try adding sound to your work, not just the voice. Oh, and a clearer storyline maybe? Points for putting neighbor totoro on your work. I'm interested to see you improve...good luck kid.
masterrom responds:
thanks for the review. it's really motivating. I know there is a lot of stuff to improve. once again, thanks.
yes!!!!
it made it, dude!!! yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
masterrom responds:
I know! I'm so excited!