Well Done
You did alright, for sure. You've got potential to carve out a niche in the portal.
Author Comments
This is my first flash(I mean I made other flashed as practice and experimenting) But this is the first one that im going to submit. So yeah I hope you enjoy it, so please add any comments to help me out in the future. Oh and don't be a dick and say it sucks for no reason at least tell me why.
- Thank you for all of your helpful comments and stuff i'll make sure that i'll improve on my work.
MetalFrog77 responds:
Thx
Decent
Music was annoying/not matching the scenery
Animation was decent
No plot/purpose
Still good for your first flash.
MetalFrog77 responds:
Yeah i'll work on a story but usually for sticks they don't need one
a bit boring
as it is, it's just 1 minute of mediocre animation.
any form of story or something to create interest would help.
and you should fix the soundloop, it doesn't stop playing when you restart the video.
MetalFrog77 responds:
yeah i'll work on that
pretty good...
its better than the first flash i will make (dont have flash yet :( )
MetalFrog77 responds:
Dont give up man keep working
What ?
All this magic fails, but jamming a sword in it works ?
Without going through the nonsense in this flash, I basically felt I already saw this thing before, so without real storyline and/or originality, it just wasn't anything special.
MetalFrog77 responds:
yeah I guess maybe I should expand on it
