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If you haven't read the first act, please do so first, otherwise this won't make any sense (links are in the select comic page)...

I finally got around to finishing it, this act has a different cover, & tracks than the last one.
The only thing left to say is shall we begin?

- Celx

I respond to all reviews eventually unless your an asshole!

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Speaking as a fellow comic writer, I have to say that was good. I have read some shit comics online and that was acctually good. The art style was awsome and the strangness to it was good.

Celx-Requin responds:

Cool what's your comic my good fellow?
- Celx


This one was the weirdest one of your comics so far. But in a good way. Very sick and twisted plot this time.

Still, the art could be a tad bit cleaner. In the second image the TV looks a bit weird, and it's almost a bit hard to even realize it's supposed to be a TV.

I like that you chose differen't musical tracks this time. And again both of them fit very well to the comic, even though both of them create different atmospheres ("Acid Horse" is a bit surreal, while "Don't abuse" creates a more creepy atmosphere).

Well, at the end of this act there are more questions left to be answered than questions that actually have been answered. So I can't wait until you submit the next comic. ^^

{ Review Request Club }

Celx-Requin responds:

It's gets even more fucked up, and bizarre as the story progresses, although it happens in a way where if you look back you can piece together the reasoning behind each action.

Thanks for the review Haggard!
- Celx

Review Request Club

I think by far this is one of the best and goriest episode you have ever out on the series so I will start

ART 9/10

I thought the art was good but I think you should have worked on the blood a bit and put more colors into the blood because it looked kind of noob but the splatter was good. I really liked the drawing in this one but try to clean it up a bit more.

AUDIO 10/10

The audio went well with this flash because it had the creepy sounds like some kind of horror movie and the whole effect with the sound on the first three panels with the comic select screen was really cool and I am glad that you didn't use the same audio as the first series.

STORY 10/10

This is the best part about it but why didn't that guy just choose not to do and just die instantly instead of a weekly torture and wouldn't he have dies of blood loss in it at all? He must have looked pretty crazy after that week.


It looks like you put a lot of effort into it considering that it probably has below 500 frames in the whole thing and it is a cool comic that you're making but you should try to make it into a printed book.


I see lots of improvement since the first episode and the storyline is getting better and better in it and I hope this goes on like this episode because it is pretty neat.

(RRC signature at top) -Joshsouza

Celx-Requin responds:

Oh there's a reason why he does what he did, I'm keeping it pretty close to the chest but you'll find out in III!

Thanks for the review I appreciate it!
- Celx

~ Review Request Club ~

~ Animation/Graphics ~

Good style as usual. A little sloppy every now and then and I wish it was cleaned up. Especially the guy on the TV because I really couldn't make out what he looked like. Actually, most of your male characters look exactly the same.

~ Story/Content ~

This one confused me again, but almost in a good way. It confused me in a way that I want to come back and watch the next episode so I understand what's going on. Hopefully future episodes make things much clearer.

~ Audio ~

There was a nice change up in the music. Keep finding different songs if at all possible because it's just a nice addition to series.

~ Overall ~

Can't wait till the next one. I'll be here to review it on time hopefully. Keep up the good work!

~ Review Request Club ~

Celx-Requin responds:

Yeah the best stories keep one disoriented, and guessing as to what the hell is going on, trust me it will all make sense in the end...

I don't think my male characters all look the same, I guess they are all around the same height, but they have different hair styles, and clothing...

I don't know how much of a variation I can add without changing the way those kind of people would dress, thanks for the review though!
- Celx

Great Serie!!

I really like this serie, it gives me kind of fear, what I don't feel everyday... I particulary love Horror movies, and I think this story is pretty interesting. It hasf a nice job into it... The art is very nice, i liked this kind of drawing, it gives more fear, the music fits very well, the kind of terrorizing song gives the perfect atmosphere to the trama!!

It's very sick you think that a man cuts his own nose to mail it to a strange guy... It's really creepy, i liked that!!! Awesome work here!! I can't wait to the next episode!!!

(Review Request Club)

Celx-Requin responds:

Oh thanks Roger appreciate the review!
- Celx

Credits & Info

4.78 / 5.00

Feb 27, 2010
2:24 AM EST

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