I almost..
cried, really. Amazingly done, 10/10.
Author Comments
Hello!
This is my first flash video submission, and hopefully you can enjoy the video :)
I worked now and then for about a week and here is the outcome.
The video is about a man who is trying to avenge his wife's death, and clear his conscience.
But the killer is someone closer to him than he expects.
Science? Schizophrenia? Supernatural? Who knows?
Edit: Thanks for all the interesting points of view and for sharing your thoughts on this. I updated the flash a little to make it more complete than before.
i like it
a very good idea, i like it, and good animations, sooooo 10 points .......... xDD
well thats all, and i really like the idea to fight yourself...that must be sad
Wow.
This was an awesome flash, dude. I love the idea of a dual personality avenging the death of a loved one that the other personality caused. Way to go and keep up the good work.
fantastic!
I recommended this for "serious shorts". The details in the animation were great, I found the story meaningful and easy to understand, and it made me feel like I was actually there, rather than watching it on a screen. 10/10 5/5
lalleba responds:
Hi and thanks!
I'm kind of new to the system her on NG, so I don't really know what that means: "Serious shorts", will look into that. But I'm guessing it's a genre of some sort?
Again thanks to you and everyone one else for all your constructive comments and for letting me know what you thought about the video! =]
Wow
That was rather impressive. I love how you made me think at the very end. That was really good. Hopefully, you'll submit more :]