two fight.... VA test too

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greetings ng and fans!!!!!!!
lots of u have been h8ing on me but i took some of the advice and used a higher frame FPS 50!! & i also put it some voice acting lip scning and face expression so i think this is my best flash yet!! :D


why bother

Just some suggestions

1) Perhaps you could shorten the credits or make a small button to display the credits

2) I think when people said "Increase the frame rate", they didn't mean just increase the file's frame rate; i think they meant that you should add more DIFFERENT frames, DIFFERENT drawings (you seem to copy the same drawing over several times)

3) Is it just me, or does the music just keep on playing even when the loop repeats itself? If it does, maybe you should change that...

4) Extend the animation's length (not by slowing it down, but by drawing more frames). People tend to rate submissions higher if they feel it is worth watching, and a short animation that couldn't have taken any more than 30 mins isn't usually regarded as "worth watching".

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that was SHORT! in the little amount of time I did see animation, though, I got a sense that if you took a good month(yeah, that's how long it takes) and just took some time to get accustomed with the Flash tools and available resources, you would be able to create a successful Flash that got at least a 2. I think that if you really tried as much as the rest of us, you'd be able to get a decent score, rather than turd of the week.

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Really guys...

I think that we have told him enough times how he can improve his horrible work. First off, were not trying to be mean, but I don't understand how this is comedy, It was only about 50 frames in total, are you really trying? If you took more than a hour to make the videos, they might be better. Untill then, I can only give you a 1.

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double ok?

Guess what i actually gave you a star for this one =)

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0.79 / 5.00

Feb 20, 2010
5:43 PM EST
Comedy - Parody
  • Turd of the Week February 24, 2010