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Alphie's Story pt 2

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_EDIT 2-20-10_
daily 2nd?! wow! It's like a dream come true... finally, an Alphie flash gets noticed! :D

Now with dialogue!

omygod. its done. ITS FINALLY DONE!! It's been over a year since Alphie's Story pt1, and it's still not done. There was actually more to this, but i decided to save it for pt 3 and post what I had. I actually had to cut off the rest and throw on a really hasty end, so the ending's kinda bad.

Anyway, pt 3 is halfway done and on its way! Enjoy!



It's like Eon Kid but with more personality.

It is good

I am glad to see this series again and especially you are going back to your action roots. My biggest complaint is that the animation does still look pretty old by today's standards. I still think this was very enjoyable, especially the beginning fight with the robot. I especially like when he was defeated by literally ripping its face apart and smashing it up. The little red orb is also a pretty good villian. While we may not have the greatest hero, you put in a lot of good stuff for him at least.

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EVanimations responds:

thanks ericho! your reviews are much appreciated and i'm glad you enjoyed it.


Your artwork is great, and all I have to say has been mentioned before. (voices, sound effects, smoothness, ect.)
Good job, keep it up.

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ah its ok

kindu stupid kinda cool

EVanimations responds:

stupid how?

This has potential!

Hey great work on this piece! I really like your drawing style, and your backgrounds look great!

Something that I felt held this flash back a bit, apart from the voice acting and dialogue mentioned below me, was the frame rate. Since it looks like you mostly use tweens, a small increase in frame rate would not be too much extra work, and it would smoothen up your movie a notch. Maybe something for future episodes? :)

Keep up the good work!

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EVanimations responds:

strange.. i actually do not use tweens! never have. ;) maybe that's the problem

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4.37 / 5.00

Feb 20, 2010
1:52 PM EST
  • Daily 2nd Place February 21, 2010