Zhamlotian Works Short 1: Training Sim.
First submission... An obstacle course is navigated.
This video should only be found here or on Zhamlotian Works and affiliates, or on youtube submitted by Eifi100.
This video is more a test than an actual video and is really a preview of what could be next.
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Nice
Needs music and needs to be longer and the animation needs some work. I am kinda summarizing everything everyone had said so far, but its true. I know animation is really hard and time consuming so all i can do is encourage you to keep doing this, you have great potential. =D
Very good start
pretty good for a start, but music would deffinetly make it WAY better. Can't wait to see more from you. Good short.
Nice Short Animation
I give it a 6/10 since I thought it was pretty cool for a short animation. only constructive criticism would be to make it longer and work on the animation. music would be nice too.
From your reviewer, Josiah10