nice

I get this animation nice for the first attempt

Not Cool

i dont understand it.What is the meaning?What the fuck are you tryin to say???Fix that next movie.

Frame rate and Animation.

Pretty good for a first-timer.The colours were quite well done,but you'd have to improve on animation and frame rate.Alot too.
I had an animation rejected before,so I understand.Mine was no colours and frame rate problem(cause mine were only black and white).
Keep trying and improving.I'm sure you'll be a pretty good animator.
I've given up as an animator,so I don't have much tips to give you,sorry.

It was great!

I hate fat fucks that compare your flash to stuff like Tarboy or something. You're not as good as me, and I suck ass, but your far from the gutters...
As for advice, I'd recommend you let your animations be a bit more fluid, and make more sense? Unless the purpose of this animation was to leave me confused, you should fix that next time.