it's ok but its confusing and I don't understand this
This rocked Heaphy! I take it this wasn't done on your own computer though, by the way, did you get a new mic for the voice overs?
That was cute.
And funny too.
Was the guy in the pink-ish shirt just there to point and scream the whole time?
It's a very long piece, which you've put together very well. The plot moves along nicely and you managed to get the character interactions to make sense without any dialogue, which is a difficult thing to do. I'll be keeping an eye out for more of your stuff in the future.