LOL Not bad but one major issue,
Actually two issues, and they're not very major. Hah. To start with the good news, it's well animated, shading looked ok, very colourful although quallity of background wasn't great looked good, very smooth animations which I liked. Problems were that is was hard to understand maybe due to lack of expressions, scenes or dilauge resulting in lack of humour. Other problem well it's only kinda a problem, ahah, umm every newcomer to flash knows from the start SFX are important. They make half the enjoyabillity, epsecially ifyou're aiming for a cintamatic effect. Which you werent here but I'm just simply noting that, anyway, SFX is good but only if it's fitting. I recognized the Counter Strike bomb difusal noise when the guy opened his eyes, hahahah! Good try jsut make the plot easier to undertsand and get more fitting sfx.
Well, I usually animate stick figures instead of people. I am a newcomer the that genre of flash.
I bet this is on everybodys mind...
Why is there a pizza in the sidewalk?
It is lifted concrete.
Good for a newbie.
I personally don't animate, but I can sure tell you are getting better at this! Keep it up!
It was alright
too short tho