Like many others, I don't understand the story as there no back filler on what has happened. I did like what I saw though, very interesting. Also, did he field punt his head into the sky at the end? GOOOOOOOAAAL!
It was intresting, but i dont understand the story.
So whatever happened to the previous episodes? I only ask this because you're portraying a story that's richly developed and well animated, but with absolutely no substance. As a viewer, I have no connection to any of those characters. Who's the protagonist? Who's the voice of reason? Who's the antagonist? Who's the nay-sayer? There's nothing to follow in this movie.
Since you titled this as episode 1, I assume that you'll make more episodes, and you very well could if you developed some sort of storyline. As it stands, you're basically masturbating in flash form and not offering the viewer anything to be entertained from.
You need a writer, my friend.
It's a mainsteam :l
I mean.. dam! nothing new! its like you took a lut of different anime series and combined the cenes. even the characters looked basic. i think the only thing that was new for me is the kicked head x] anyway I think you did very well with the animation and the voices, so I decided to give you 6.
He kicks off his head...
The animation is pretty basic and you have many problems with the human anatomy but you still manage to parody anime.
But I think its meant to be taken seriously. Try to use your own imagination next time.