not that bad
The story seemed like a beginning of great story to tell (especially at the end). As for the animation, everything constantly moving was ok. it kinda kept the movie from being too boring to watch. Don't know if you're planning to expand this or not, but i would like to see improvement on this style of animation. I hardly see this style beyond that of children's toons and short scenes of comedy. You'll might do something pretty cool with it.