not that bad
The story seemed like a beginning of great story to tell (especially at the end). As for the animation, everything constantly moving was ok. it kinda kept the movie from being too boring to watch. Don't know if you're planning to expand this or not, but i would like to see improvement on this style of animation. I hardly see this style beyond that of children's toons and short scenes of comedy. You'll might do something pretty cool with it.
Hmmm...maybe you right )
But i must to tell: All movies i do for myself - newgrounds is just a big source where contains much critics - i just want to know what the others think of it and what can advice to me ) Sorry for my language - i'm Russian )
The plot isn't very interesting. The sound is pretty bad. Graphics are poor, and the background moving like that annoys me a little :(.
I'm sure you can do better
It was experimental in anyway )