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Feb 6, 2010 | 6:41 AM EST

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This is my first animation, and I worked forever trying to get the preloader and music all set up. Go easy, as this is my first. Hope you guys like it!



Rated 4 / 5 stars


Other than these other idiots behind me, I found this to be a pretty unique flash and even though it wasnt long , it has potential.

I can see your naturally good at flash and you can defentailly make good flashes !

Keep it up, please message me if you ever come up with another flash, and ill rate it for you

Good luck !
- James

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PivotImpact responds:

Thanks! I look forward to working with more flash and making longer animations.


Rated 0 / 5 stars


I agree with the other dude just put a little effort.

PivotImpact responds:

Your kidding. I put a good hour into this man. It is my first, just go easy dude.

Thanks for watching though.


Rated 0 / 5 stars

Not enough..

Wery short and the musik was awfull diden't fit in. no offence but if you whant to make somthing that you whant other ppl to see don't do 5sec flash and a write some stuff on word and tell ppl to go easy on you. you coud have made somthing better. Srsly What to rate here? I coud do that in some mins and i suck at that shit. Try harder some ppl do sit at their comp for weeks or months to make a flash it's not like you can do anything good in 5mins (if your not an pro artsit that have skills in your area). even in it's your first sit down a week or some few days. 5min work is not even trying a mouth and somthing that i guess is a finger ain't much. Am sure you can do somthing better if you just work on it.

PivotImpact responds:

This took me a good 45 minutes. My first time opening flash, no tutorials or anything. God.


Rated 2 / 5 stars

Beginning ended

This may be the beginning of a beautiful animation.
It's just a shame that you give more time to the title, in the end.
Never the less, the animation seems particularly well undertaken, although short, and you should definitely continue to make animation.
You should even try to explore this one animation to a larger movie.
But this is just an advice.
Hope you continue to do this, I hope I'll be seeing you around here ;)


Rated 3 / 5 stars

bit short

i liked it but twas a little short maybe you could have pushed it further with more example so try to make 2 or 3 scenes more

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