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This is my first flash animation for newgrounds, I also added "voices" for this flash. Anyway rate it and make sure to comment. Any constructive criticism is appreciated.
fuck this piece of crap
stupid sprites, stupid background, stupid fight, stupid EVERYTHING!
Heres how you can make it better:
1) Make it longer
2) There should not be a fart at the end
3) Make a "PLAY" button so it doesnt loop
4) Make it less obvious
With these steps, you'll be a pro.
It made me laugh.
Pretty good. I'm new at this animation thing myself, but for your first time, it was pretty good.
But you gotta go up from here. Here is some advice:
#1 - Better backgrounds are a good investment for something like this. Maybe an actual sonic-level pic or whatever. But stuff that looks like MSPaint work isn't so good.
#2 - Shadow's last line was cut off at the end. That's a bit annoying.
#3 - Should have just a play button so it doesn't loop.
#4 - (Plot Wise) have some sort of sign Sonic is still there. Leaves it open for a sequel so we can have more fights like Peter Griffin Vs. The chicken.
#5 - Don't cut the voices or sound, just lower the volume a bit, if anything. Course, people can just turn their damn speakers down if it is that big a problem for them. I would even add some LIGHT background music from a sonic soundtrack. If you add music, don't let it overpower the voices (but SFX are okay).
that's about all I have. I think it is good and these few suggestions will just make it awesome altogether. I look forward to more of your work.
I give you
2/5 for your effurts.
Sweet bro.... def a good first movie
A new original animated series done in pixel art!
The last man on Earth sat alone in a room...
After the breakup.
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