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Feb 3, 2010 | 7:17 AM EST

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Assalamualaikum and Hey there,

A first submission by me and Haizeel Hashnan (akoRn) in year 2010. This going to be a comedy series too!

THE UNIVERSITY: Presentation Day - part 1

The University tells the life of student in campus, lots of random and unexpected happened in Minimedia University. In this episode, the student had to face the fearsome challenge, which is to present their assignment for the first time ever!!

The voice acting was brilliantly acted by the following people:
Dreux Ferrano (Druoxtheshredder)
Spiff Shu
Kimlinh Tran (Hnilmik)
Anthony Lopez
Michael Nash (Adam Crow)
Tony Rooney (Nasicom)
Jazmik Orgazmic
Anthony Sardinha (Antfish)
Matthew Vargas

Well, that's all for now. Hope you enjoy the animation, and please drop a review... Oh yeah, please do vote! =D

EDIT 01: Wow, front page!! I would to thanks this to the fans, Newgrounds and especially TomFulp for giving this opportunity!

EDIT 02 : Daily 5th! It's an honor! Thank you for all your vote & ty to Tom Fulp & Newgrounds...! I try to improve all the flws we haf here into the next part... Again, thank you!



Rated 4 / 5 stars

writing needs alot of work

the animations good, and i bloody love that jazz-funk ending tune, but the script was dry, it had moments, like saying no to geena, that cracked me up, but everything else was kinda dissapointing.

PS im actually living the life of this show, if you want some funny stories I got whole bag of em here

Blakant responds:

sure, juz contact me, glad if u can help me. THANKS!! Looking forward from u. =D
Heck, I'll even send u a PM right away


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars


The animation was good, and also the only reason you got into top 5. Besides that, you lacked a story, much less any character development. I had no clue who anyone was, or much less what was even going on. Before you go leaping into something I'll give you small advice of making a script you feel comfortable with, maybe even have a peer review about it before releasing something.

Blakant responds:

okay thanks. I did had few feedback from some of ppl I met based on the script, fix here n there. But still, not managed to impressed every1. Sry for that, and we're trying to work on the E1P2 atm. And we'll do our best. =]


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I thought It was okay

I mean, it wasn't a masterpiece, and it wasn't even considered great. It was okay, just, why in the hell did the black dude have an Indian accent?

Blakant responds:

its becuz he's an idian? lol


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

For a pilot, not that great but not crap either

I dont think the artwork on this was that bad. I see alot of work went into getting alot of voice actors for it, but then the trouble should of been put into making a more introduced storyline for the first ever episode. I did laugh at the Achievement joke, even if it has been done before.

Reviews have been harsh I take it for the lack of character introductions and that you can only just figure out the story. I'd try and get more creative jokes in the ones to come, otherwise it might stay dull. If anyone remembers 'College University' years back, which was similar to this, was a very good series. More will have to be put into the next additions in order for it to get more attention. Not a terrible start by any means. 7/10.


Rated 2 / 5 stars

Lacking of story line...

It was a very unnecessary intro in the creative building and it was hard to figure who were the main characters until the 2nd scene, whom I still do not know the names of.
If you need to look at the credits for the names of the characters, it usually means that they had no real impact on the story or you did not mention their names in the first place.
Only names I heard and remembered were: The Janitor, Geena, and King.

I would comment on the story, but there was no real story or plot. The only thing that is saving this is that it's p1. The problem with this is that you must hook the viewer to watch the next parts in which I am sorry you have failed.

Your jokes were not that funny except for the past relationship between Geena and King but it was immediately ruined by "achievement unlocked" gag. It would had been fine if there were instances of video games in the story but all you had was an art class assignment.

At times the sound effects seem to be louder than the voices. There was no medium to any sound to this flash.

All that aside you have great promise for being an animator. Definitely room for improvement but a lot better than what I seen on this website.
Just work on your story more and the right jokes will come. I'll be there for the p2.

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