Um..
This episode was too short. Also, you just need more improvement in this animation, you need voice actors, you need to make it very creative, and make a plot. Make sure it's very interesting. And sprites were pretty decent. But I did like the text "NOISE" in the beginning. Um...what font was that? It's pretty interesting. But anyway, keep working on this...I bet you'll get better.
So, you need a preloader. If you don't know what that means, that means it's the loading screen. Well, who's cares about that. Anyways, about the graphics, they weren't very good. The background was, but the people were not drawn well. But, the background looked very amazing for a first animation. Hey, who cares if people are being rude to you, this is your first flash, it can't be expected to be amazing.
The blood was pretty good, despite it should be a little better. Try your best on others, make the viewers cheer for your animation and you will be famous. You just need improvement on voice actors, and other of the stuff I said in that other paragraph. The whole animation was very short, I liked part of it but it really needs improvement. Despite you did a very awesome job on this. Good try though.
The concept was kind of ridiculous; I don't even get it so...you need details to show the storyline was true like you said in the description. Despite you did a very great try, as I said. The fonts you use like I said on other paragraphs were used greatly, on your next episode you could use those again. :P The doom characters were alright, you need to be more creative and you need more people giving you an excellent Current Score and the Average Score. I'm sorry if I took points away but this truly is a 2. So now here are my overall scores: :(
Graphics: 6/10
Voice Actors: 4/10
Sounds: 6/10
Oh yeah, one more thing, the sounds. The sounds were decent and were pretty good, despite you need better voice actors and need to be better! After you submit the next episode, I will make a review right there at the first day EVER and review on it. I'm not trying to be mean but I'm being honest in my opinion. But good try though.
I got to go now so bye-bye!