Interesting
Though, it failed only a little bit at a certain point. I think I should report ONLY because you said to intent doing a sequel.
The point is: in a matter of fact, I took long to find out he was dead. The only clues I got are that his face is open while he does nothing about such severe injury. The other clue: he does not do controlled movement, all he does is stay at the position where someone left him.
Though, when it shows his 'vision' I got confused: why someone who is dead is looking at somewhere like her skirt or her face?!?
I suggest you put something that shows purely the fact of death next time. What about a hole showing his hearth wich, by the way, is only kept inside because of his toraxical bones?
I know I was a bit dumb for not finding it out too fast, since, uh, you said he was on your 'Authot comments' section...
Notice that blood shows only injury, and injuried people CAN be alive. A loose hearth would pass the information that the reaper is doing his job right... Without your own comment, I would still be confused, since we have evidence about both life and death in the movie.
Sorry for the long review and the repetitions of information, but I liked the video and I'll vote 5.
EXCEPT FOR THAT, I FOUND IT INNOVATIVE.