Not bad for a first
The animation itself is pretty good, a little choppy at times (especially the jumping cookie at the end)
The mouse cookie was kinda annoying. I wanted to eat it.
Just keep playing with flash, and you'll get better :3
Author Comments
^w^ i finally got it done, and im sorry there is no music as of right now, and the fact that it i s so short ^__^''
but i worked REALLY hard on this :3 and i think its my best animation EVAR
try not to be so harsh on it plz :3 i'd love some tips and advice for improving my work X3 i can make things move but i refuse to do sprite animation becuase its so cheap
please enjoy and stop by my DA account ^w^ www.shirokaze2012.deviant art.com
i also think the floating cookie following the mouse was a bit much though XD
5/5 10/10 ??? :3
Heya!
Yay! My first comment on Newgrounds after 2 years of having the account! :D
Anyway, not bad, really
Cool
I thought this was pretty cool for what I believe is your first submission from other comments I read. But anyways, try to add music and no Cookie cursor, lol. Good theme though. Who DOESN'T want to see a Rabbit steal a Cookie?
i oddly liked it
the cookie cursor got in the way of the animation and sound would be nice, otherwise I'm impressed with the animation, seeing this is your first. Hope you make more
"Meh, not bad. Not good not bad."
It was ok. I had absoultly no idea what was going on and how on earth some woodland creatures got cookie and how a random fishing rod caught a cookie, ohhh and the rabbit lloked like it was humping the cookie with its mouth. Not bad though to say it was your first. That was my cookie :P
Shirokaze2012 responds:
not all things have to make sense X3
and yea, the rabbit should die
thanks for the review ^w^
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1.74 / 5.00
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