Record Somewhere quieter
it has potential, but the background sound of some chavs car or whatever it was kinda ruined it, try getting a quieter place to record the audio
Was this piece done in paint? It sure looks like it, blurry every here and there. other then that I recommend a better microphone or subtitles, sort of hard to make out what all of the characters are saying. I liked it anyhow, bring us more, bring us better! =D
Oh we shall, next time we'll make the recording even better and make the story line more better, this was just a pilot, one that we'll use as an example to work from and make the rest great.
I really liked it
It has a lot of potential, but you'll need to figure out the basics of audio recording and flash first. Even if it's very shoddy looking, you'll have to remember that even Tom Fulp started making things that looked weird and bizarre (his UFO game, anyone?) and not so great. Also, the audio wasn't so hot. Perhaps if you upgraded your microphone (maybe $50 at the most) it'd go smoother. Still, I maintain that it could morph into something great.
Thank you very much.
i couldnt understand crap until the ending
Needs animation & better audio
Good idea, but the audio is very bad quality. Any way to improve on that? Sounds like you record it while on a bus or plane or something. Aside from that, I'd suggest more actual animation instead of mostly still shots with narration. Good idea, though.