it was good
i liked it and that the soldiers are shadowy, kinda short but apart from that nothing to bad. good job!
Author Comments
My first submission to NG in a year or so.
I made this last year in a fews days as a quick cartoon to keep content fresh. I'm quite proud of how it turned out though more time would have given me a better result
This is a tribute to all those who fought in the first world war.
Yes, the blood thing sucks, its a very difficult thing to get, but I think the crying scene negates that flaw. The bell at the end was a bitch to do.
The music is kinda quiet so you may need to turn your speakers up.
hope you enjoy!
StillBeatingPictures responds:
Thanks
Not bad
It definably could have been better, the ending was a bit abrupt, and the animation was nothing special, as said in your description, time would have given you a better result.
StillBeatingPictures responds:
Yeah, I wasnt too happy with the cycles I did in this. It's got its good bits though.
Thanks for reading the comments and for the review.