Nice job

While I did enjoy this cartoon thoroughly, I can't help but agree with MrWolfe, some adjustments with the pacing could have helped. But hey, it's still a great film!

Focus on the pacing

A joke is only as good as its pacing. Viewers are always trying to pay attention to what they're "supposed" to be looking at, but if you have too many pauses it just ends up confusing them as to what the joke is supposed to be.

After the beginning pause where Snake is waiting, the rest of it could take about 15 seconds and it would be much funnier. He grabs the guy, pulls out the knife, the guy craps his pants, Snake says "Are you kidding me?" and equips the crocodile head, then chomps him.

Waiting with the crocodile head is especially confusing. I know you put a bunch of work into making it look cool, but it's more important to make the whole story flow better.

SNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!1

the animation was sucky but since it MGS i give u ten
i bet that guy was johnny lol

lol

pretty funny

Heh

Not bad.
The animation wasn't all that great, and it was kinda short, but it still gave me a good laugh.
Nice voice work, and the highlight was easily when he put on the croc cap.
Long live Big Boss!
Oh wait....never mind.