A continued improvment in your work...
Well as promised to the author its now time for me to take a look at his latest work and give a small review. This work is a lot better than the old submitted work. While the perspective of the werewolf looking straight at you still seems a little odd it is very hard to draw something like that without a lot of work on perspective so its still something I will not fault the artist on. However this brings us to the werewolf. James I hope this don't sound to harsh but one thing you might want to do is look at some real wolves and see if you can find a color pattern you might want to try and copy. The one solid color wolf while yes it can be done makes a lot of the work put into the character disappear behind a blur of darkness. When you showed the part where he looked at the cop and had the two different colored eyes was a good setting for later story material and was a break from how dark the wolf was over all. Music wise your choices were good for setting the tone to something of this nature I wouldn't have anything to say about that at all. So lets look at a breakdown:
And as a few people have said and I do agree this feels a little more like a trailer with the quick movements and style this was presented. There is nothing wrong with that it allows for you to expand more later when you do more work on this. Over all as I said its a big improvement over your last work and given time I believe we will see where this story leads.
PS. Now that you have a tablet your next work should keep to the one style of art. While the change isn't completely drastic it is noticeable enough that it throws off the feel a little but its something that is learned and going back redoing a lot of art can be a hard feeling. So I wouldn't worry too much about it. Looking forward to the next one.