It was good for being a flash though I will have to criticize a litte.
You can do imrpovements the grafics and the voice acting might need some extra training to it. Overall it was well made and I hope to see more of you with increasing quality.
In the fight with the masked man and the father you used the battle soundtrack from "Heroes of might and magic IV", right?
Thanx for critic)
Yes "Heroes of might and magic IV" music right there.
Work on this
Should improve sounds(are really crappy)and graphics but really nice story
Btw try to use vocal sintethizer for the alien and a fade effect instead of cutting action
It's not bad, but litlle work, make good and you win=) Not bad job man
If "not bad" = 2 ??? ))
I like the story line you have going on here, and your style isn't bad either. For this being your first flash I would say it's fantastic. You will get better at drawing overall the more you animate. You are off to a very good start and I want to see more of your stuff in the portal. :D
Respect man :)