I think its a pretty good film for a first try. In the future I'd suggest not making the background so....... painted. Try adding some different shades of green to the grass etc.
The quality might not be the best but it still got a few laughs out of me. It was really random and funny. For your first flash it is pretty good! I hope to see very good stuff from you in the future :D
Keep it up
I see potential and more of Shad in the future, and he'll hopefully be in a better quality video =3
creative idea, and new twist
I love all the video game references. If you make the fps faster and add more frames, it will look smoother. Also, the fight scene was cool, but as soon as he got the anime talking it got a little annoying. Try to make it shorter if you do that and dont overemphasize the mouth. Other than that, great flash, keep up the good work :D
Carrot Attack Pizza Sword
Quality of animation is low, but it works, particularly it succeeds at generating humor. Drawing skills aren't up to bare minimum standards, and visual design is lacking. The story is minimal, but the jokes work.
All this adds up to 4/10 + 1 for pizza sword, and + for Tiny Tim.