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gears of douches

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my first cartoon im just tryin to see wat style works. i did try some of egorators becouse people like it but i try not to use to much

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Not that good..

Bad animation. Does not really hit the style completely. Also the sound is really bad especially when the gun goes off..

I smell unoriginality

I feel as though you've borrowed rather heavily from Egoraptors own style of animating (though poorly) and voice acting.

Sort of an awesome falsh.

It's pretty funny and id like to see more from you.
P.S. its looping.

Good effort.

I can tell from the animation and length of this flash that you clearly spent more time on it than the average first-time flash. However is still isn't perfect, for example the animation doesn't flow well and the voice recording is far too scratchy and hurt my ears whenever they made a gunshot.

However, with more practice and better audio recording you could make far better things than this.

Also, you're badly in need of a preloader, you can download the Newgrounds one from this downloads page.

hammityville responds:

yeah but i use toon boom i dont know how to put one on

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Jan 8, 2010
3:32 AM EST